I said I’d come and leave you a comment.. and here I am! here are some corrections that (I think) are right, but don’t take my corrections too seriously, I can be wrong many times!
a lot of points that should be considered ethic and morality—what are you trying to say, that ethic and morality should be displayed in the film, or that a lot of points should be considered ethic and moral..?
someone explain it—someone explains it
maybe they cause the same smile as me do… __ maybe they cause you the same smile that it does to me
Doesn’t matter about be her father…—doesn’t matter about being her father..
I can fell anything but gratitude—problem of spelling “feel”
there are some sentences that sound weird to me, but they don’t seem incorrect.. so I’ll comment them with you later remember! this afternoon.. one american/english couple (you can choose the nacionality, I think I have an american pronunciation xD) in barcelona.. it will be funny
thank god I’ve remembered the damn sentence! “What a hard words to be said..” ok, it’s probably right, but A hard WORDS? as I said I think it’s right.. because if it was wrong I don’t know how you could say it.. so just don’t take me seriously, ok?
hey sweetie!
I said I’d come and leave you a comment.. and here I am!
here are some corrections that (I think) are right, but don’t take my corrections too seriously, I can be wrong many times!
a lot of points that should be considered ethic and morality—what are you trying to say, that ethic and morality should be displayed in the film, or that a lot of points should be considered ethic and moral..?
someone explain it—someone explains it
maybe they cause the same smile as me do… __ maybe they cause you the same smile that it does to me
Doesn’t matter about be her father…—doesn’t matter about being her father..
I can fell anything but gratitude—problem of spelling “feel”
there are some sentences that sound weird to me, but they don’t seem incorrect.. so I’ll comment them with you later
remember! this afternoon.. one american/english couple (you can choose the nacionality, I think I have an american pronunciation xD) in barcelona.. it will be funny
see u later
Lots of love,
BeTh*
thank god I’ve remembered the damn sentence! “What a hard words to be said..” ok, it’s probably right, but A hard WORDS? as I said I think it’s right.. because if it was wrong I don’t know how you could say it.. so just don’t take me seriously, ok?
take care, I miss u too
BeTh*
hei!
nice post, guy!
but… have you seen this film without me? how you could do it? :’(
ok… don’t worry… for this time…
sorry boy… i’m latte… but please, visit my last post, I think you will like it.
see you tomorrow